Lord of the Flies review
Question: "I was looking for some editing help and review on Lord of the Flies. Perhaps, someone could help me here. I sent my paper for editing revision and they sent me the result. Here is the part that contains mistakes (professor marked it): "Among all the types of communication in the world, communication between children is the most successful way to convey a feeling. In fact, it's the most expressive one. Some tribes used body language as the main means of communication. For example, Maori tribes were the first to show anger through their nose reactions in front of the enemy. " I wanted to send it to Grammarly. Are there any mistakes, cause I don't see any. I edited the piece myself several times, but the professor says I still have some mistakes... Please, help."
Lord of the Flies review:
"Communication in the books is expressed with the help of different means. Firstly, it's rendered by the symbols. Secondly, communicating the feelings and fears, children use interjections..."